13:11 Oct 13, 2016 |
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| Selected response from: Terry Richards France Local time: 19:43 | ||||||
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4 +13 | it's a colon, and it's fine |
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5 +1 | Yes, ok |
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Yes, ok Explanation: Definitely ok. In fact, there isn't much else you could put there. |
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it's a colon, and it's fine Explanation: The colon (this is a semi-colon --> ; <--) is fine, they are frequently used to introduce lists. The quotes, however, are completely unnecessary. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 17 mins (2016-10-13 13:29:05 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The quotes are still unnecessary. In fact, they look worse with the semi-colons in place. Also, because it is a list, the "and" is not needed either. I would do it like this: The EMC Technical Center provides customers with the following: (1) Countermeasures at test sites; (2) On-site countermeasures; (3) Electromagnetic environment measurements; (4) Development of products and equipment. We also provide information on international standards and regulations and hold seminars. |
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