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English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO] Bus/Financial - Other | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Jennifer Levey Chile Local time: 17:58 | ||||||
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4 +4 | We |
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We Explanation: Assuming the speaker (or writer) is, in fact, a member of "the (XXX) group", it is perfectly acceptable to begin the sentence with "We ...". "We" suggests personal involvement (closeness) and strengthens the idea of community, whilst "the group", or "they" create (artificial) distance. |
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