actual breathing and tasting and consciousness of the new thing

Portuguese translation: Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir

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English term or phrase:actual breathing and tasting and consciousness of the new thing
Portuguese translation:Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir
Entered by: Danik 2014

12:39 Oct 14, 2015
English to Portuguese translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / creative writing
English term or phrase: actual breathing and tasting and consciousness of the new thing
Hi everyone! I'm translating a piece of creative prose on watching a sunrise and I'm not sure about this phrase, any help appreciated!

Thanks!


What if every day began with the sunrise?
With an ***actual breathing and tasting and consciousness of the new thing*** originated, instead of instant, blind immersion?
Lindsay Spratt
France
Local time: 03:27
Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir
Explanation:
Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir.
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Danik 2014
Brazil
Grading comment
obrigada!
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Summary of answers provided
4 +2com uma saborosa golfada de ar e com a consciência de estar perante a eterna renovação (das coisas)
Leonor Machado
4com um respirar e saborear, e também uma consciencialização relativamente ao que acabou de nascer
Ana Vozone
3 +1Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir
Danik 2014


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com um respirar e saborear, e também uma consciencialização relativamente ao que acabou de nascer


Explanation:
Uma interpretação...

Ana Vozone
Local time: 02:27
Native speaker of: Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 216
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33 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
actual breathing and tasting and consciousness of the new thing originated
Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir


Explanation:
Presente em cada respiração e em cada sabor e na consciência desse algo novo que acabou de surgir.

Danik 2014
Brazil
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Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman, Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 127
Grading comment
obrigada!

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agree  expressisverbis
1 hr
  -> Obrigada, Expressis!
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46 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
com uma saborosa golfada de ar e com a consciência de estar perante a eterna renovação (das coisas)


Explanation:
Tradução livre

Leonor Machado
Local time: 02:27
Native speaker of: Portuguese
PRO pts in category: 123

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  expressisverbis: Uma "arfada de ar" ou "lufada de ar" ia melhor... na minha humilde opinião.
1 hr
  -> Obrigada!

agree  Thomas Melo
1 hr
  -> Obg Thomas
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