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14:34 Oct 2, 2015 |
French to English translations [PRO] Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Philippa Smith Local time: 21:25 | ||||||
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If the eyesight pores over, the nose keels over, (the game is over!) Explanation: my attempt to render the rhythm and assonance of the French:) or if you prefer more literal: If the (eye)sight details, the nose fails, or non rhyming: If the eyesight scrutinizes, the nose weakens, naturally you can find many synonyms of both terms these are what I would use -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2015-10-02 15:47:05 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- naturally in my first option some personification and humour is involved |
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