la proximité que sa pratique quotidienne exige et induit

English translation: [see my suggestion]

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French term or phrase:la proximité que sa pratique quotidienne exige et induit
English translation:[see my suggestion]
Entered by: philgoddard

09:46 Jun 11, 2015
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French term or phrase: la proximité que sa pratique quotidienne exige et induit
I'm posting this in marketing, as it's a fairly creative translation job about 'la créativité liée au vélo'. In the foreword, various people are expressing opinions on questions relating to bikes. The topic here is "Comment expliquer l'universalité du vélo?"

« La vie c’est comme une bicyclette, il faut avancer pour ne pas perdre l’équilibre ». Cette célèbre citation d’Einstein rejoint l’idée ancestrale, incarnée par les révolutions planétaires et humaines, selon laquelle l'équilibre ne se trouve qu'en mouvement. Le long passé nomade de l'homme nous habite encore. Par sa modération même, son imbattable rendement énergétique et **la proximité que sa pratique quotidienne exige et induit** tout à la fois, la bicyclette est exemplaire.

I think 'proximité' is trying to evoke the fact that you can't cycle too far but also that being on a bike makes things look closer. Any help conveying that fluently would be much appreciated!
MoiraB
France
Local time: 12:02
[see my suggestion]
Explanation:
"The way it puts us in touch with ourselves and our environment on a daily basis".
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philgoddard
United States
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I thought this sounded spot-on so, bearing in mind the client's comment, I suggested a slightly modified version, which was accepted: 'the way it puts us in touch with ourselves, other people and our environment on a daily basis'. Certainly covers all bases! Thanks, everyone.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +2the close contact demanded and produced by cycling every day
B D Finch
4 +1[see my suggestion]
philgoddard
3the familiarity that daily cycling both demands and leads to
katsy


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the familiarity that daily cycling both demands and leads to


Explanation:
I'd agree with BC Finch that this may well be something about close contact . A kind of symbiosis between the rider and the means of locomotion.
However, I'd suggest that it is the fact that the rider becomes more familiar with the bike/contact with the world, that leads to balance.... and at the same time you need balance to advance on a bike...

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Note added at 3 hrs (2015-06-11 12:56:28 GMT)
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sorry, BD Finch, my typing error

katsy
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
[see my suggestion]


Explanation:
"The way it puts us in touch with ourselves and our environment on a daily basis".

philgoddard
United States
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PRO pts in category: 175
Grading comment
I thought this sounded spot-on so, bearing in mind the client's comment, I suggested a slightly modified version, which was accepted: 'the way it puts us in touch with ourselves, other people and our environment on a daily basis'. Certainly covers all bases! Thanks, everyone.

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agree  Sheri P
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26 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
the close contact demanded and produced by cycling every day


Explanation:
I don't think that 'proximité' is about not being able to "cycle too far" but it is about the way that cycling brings you into close contact with both your own physical activity that propels the bike (your own body), and with your surroundings. You are not cocooned from the outside world as you are in a car, bus or train.

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Note added at 7 hrs (2015-06-11 16:54:38 GMT)
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Further to philgoddard's comment below, I think perhaps I'd amend my suggestion to:
the close contact with physical reality that cycling every day demands and gives.


B D Finch
France
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  AllegroTrans: or ....by daily cycling
2 hrs
  -> Thanks AT

agree  Rebecca Mynett
3 hrs
  -> Thanks Rebecca

neutral  philgoddard: I agree with your explanation, but I think your translation stays too close to the French and is not instantly understandable. You need to say contact with what, and "demanded and produced" sounds a bit awkward.
3 hrs
  -> I think you have a point there. See what you think of my amended suggestion above.
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