насыщенность

English translation: rephrase it

10:33 May 14, 2015
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Medical - Psychology / клиническая психология
Russian term or phrase: насыщенность
контекст
"Так, в результате проведенного исследования установлено, что у пациентов, характеризующихся высокими показателями активности, насыщенности жизненного процесса, осмысленности и интереса к жизни послеоперационный период протекал более благоприятно".
Мультитран дает варианты saturation, abundance и intensity для слова "насыщенность", и rich для "насыщенный". Мне кажется, saturation имеет скорее биологический оттенок, который в моем в моем примере не нужен.
Ekaterina Gvritishvili
Russian Federation
Local time: 03:01
English translation:rephrase it
Explanation:
The sentence is so packed with unnecessary and repetitive verbiage, that unless you are obliged to translate it more literally, I would suggest boiling "характеризующихся высокими показателями активности, насыщенности жизненного процесса" down to: patients "who lead full lives...."
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erika rubinstein
3abundance
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rephrase it


Explanation:
The sentence is so packed with unnecessary and repetitive verbiage, that unless you are obliged to translate it more literally, I would suggest boiling "характеризующихся высокими показателями активности, насыщенности жизненного процесса" down to: patients "who lead full lives...."

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intensity


Explanation:
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erika rubinstein
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abundance


Explanation:
This is The Law Of Abundance in action.
Look into any lake, stream or pond and observe the abundance of life that dwells within it.



    Reference: http://www.abundance-and-happiness.com/law-of-abundance.html
Dmitry Murzakov
Russian Federation
Local time: 02:01
Native speaker of: Russian
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