brav

English translation: demure

08:22 Feb 16, 2015
German to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Social Science, Sociology, Ethics, etc.
German term or phrase: brav
Despite the many possible translations for this little word, I would like to invite your suggestions for just the right term that hits the spot in this context:

Sie sitzt da, brav, traut sich nicht aus der Rolle zu fallen, als wären ihre Schuhe auf den Boden geklebt.

Die Frisur: brav, die Kleidung: brav, sogar der Gang: brav. Mit ihr, da war er sich sicher, wäre er vor Abenteuern sicher.
Linguaphil
Germany
Local time: 17:29
English translation:demure
Explanation:
I think might hit the spot here....
Selected response from:

Lesley Robertson MA, Dip Trans IoLET
Austria
Local time: 17:29
Grading comment
Thank you Leslie!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
3 +6demure
Lesley Robertson MA, Dip Trans IoLET
5 +1like a good girl
Annegret Robinson
4 +2proper
Trude Stegmann
4modest
British Diana
3ordinary
Donald Jacobson
3unobtrusive
franglish
3neat and tidy
Yorkshireman
3staid
Michael Martin, MA
3well-behaved
billcorno (X)


Discussion entries: 21





  

Answers


9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +6
demure


Explanation:
I think might hit the spot here....

Lesley Robertson MA, Dip Trans IoLET
Austria
Local time: 17:29
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thank you Leslie!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Eleanore Strauss: Actually like this one..as it captures both the positive and negative of brav. I've often looked for a way to communicate this in English... such as not wanting a "brav" hairdo.
9 hrs

agree  Yorkshireman: Maybe, if someone can confirm that the female character is an adult. // Confirmed, I agree.
10 hrs

agree  Lancashireman: See Discussion Box
14 hrs

agree  Nicola Wood
1 day 8 mins

agree  Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
1 day 3 hrs

agree  Rebecca Garber
1 day 10 hrs
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9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
ordinary


Explanation:
Just one option

Donald Jacobson
United States
Local time: 10:29
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Donald! I stuck with demure for this text, but who knows where else I'll need your idea ...

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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
like a good girl


Explanation:
A round-about way of describing this but I think this is the closest match.


Example sentence(s):
  • Her hairstyle is a good girl's hairstyle, her clothes are a good girl's clothes, she even walks like a good girl.
Annegret Robinson
Local time: 17:29
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Annegret! I found your idea inspiring, though I chose demure for this context.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Yorkshireman: Good girls go to heaven, bad girls get to go everywhere :-)
7 hrs
  -> :D

agree  heidi (X): I like your translation of the German sentence. Well done ! // Am glad you liked it. "My Fair Lady" is one of my all-time favorites. I can watch it any time :-)
8 hrs
  -> Thank you, Heidi - and I like the clip from "My Fair Lady"!
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
modest


Explanation:
assuming we are talking about the 1950s or so

British Diana
Germany
Local time: 17:29
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Diana! However, I stuck with demure since this is a modern-day text.

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7 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
proper


Explanation:
In the sense of "as it should be", "as customary", "correct", "appropriate"


    Reference: http://www.linguee.de/englisch-deutsch/uebersetzung/proper.h...
Trude Stegmann
Local time: 17:29
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Trude! Though I chose demure, prim and proper might make the page in another text ...


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Lancashireman: Might work better as a duet: prim and proper http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/prim and proper. Any ideas about a suitable sentence structure? I don't think the German one will work in English.
1 hr

neutral  Yorkshireman: Hi Trude, add your proper to my prim, and we may have a deal :-)
2 hrs

agree  Peter Keegan
21 hrs
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
unobtrusive


Explanation:
speaking of a boy or man

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Note added at 8 hrs (2015-02-16 16:36:36 GMT)
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unfortunately I only I read the last sentence, but unobtrusive would also work for a girl

franglish
Switzerland
Local time: 17:29
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in category: 4
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you for the inspiring idea! For my context, however, I chose demure.

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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
neat and tidy


Explanation:
She wasn't going to drop him in any adventures.

Usually the beginning of a rip-roaring adventure story with...

pick whichever you like to make your own story:

Kidnapped fathers (preferably professors working on secret projects)
Pirates
Bandits
Spies
Deserts or jungles
Ancient cultures
Mysterious ships
Wicked uncles or stepfathers
Ruthless criminals (do the good ones have Ruth, and who is she anyway?)

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Note added at 9 hrs (2015-02-16 17:31:26 GMT)
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I forgot orphans and terrible public schools :-)

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Note added at 9 hrs (2015-02-16 17:36:29 GMT)
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Neat and tidy: one could even say "prim" to put it in the right period.

Yorkshireman
Germany
Local time: 17:29
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Yorkshireman! (...) were nothing less than demure hits the spot!

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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
staid


Explanation:
Looks like this could be combined with various other nouns without sounding too outlandish...

staid haircut,
staid clothes
staid gait

More options specific to context:
“She was just sitting there, looking staid/strait-laced/ unassertive.."


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Note added at 22 hrs (2015-02-17 07:04:36 GMT)
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Reluctant to stick her neck out, she just sat there looking staid (strait-laced/unassertive), as if her feet were stuck to the ground.

Staid hairstyle, staid clothes, even her gait seemed staid. She’d keep him out of trouble. That much he was sure of.


Michael Martin, MA
United States
Local time: 11:29
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 34
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you Martin! This, too, is an inspiring idea, though I chose demure to best fit the context.

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1 day 11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
well-behaved


Explanation:
Nobody's used this one yet. Also, "obedient" comes to mind.

billcorno (X)
United States
Local time: 08:29
Native speaker of: English
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you billcorno! I'll save all of those great ideas for another time, this time I stuck with demure as the best option.

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