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09:16 Feb 13, 2015 |
French to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Cosmetics, Beauty / description of a relaxing massage oil | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Miranda Joubioux (X) Local time: 05:31 | ||||||
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4 +6 | Pure relaxation |
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4 | Let go of all your tensions |
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3 | complete release from stress |
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3 | A moment of peace |
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Let go of all your tensions Explanation: 'Let go' is the obvious one for me, though lots of other possibilities too, of course -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 mins (2015-02-13 09:21:02 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Totally unwind, totally let go of your tensions, yield to total relaxation, surrender to the pleasure of... etc! -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 12 mins (2015-02-13 09:28:52 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Hm, that's trickier. Abandon is a bit suggestive to my mind. 'Surrender' could be made less suggestive with the right wording.'A total letting go'? 'A sensual abandon' could maybe work with the right wording after it? -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 16 mins (2015-02-13 09:32:54 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- That sounds a bit cheesy to me! (sorry :-) -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2015-02-13 10:18:32 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I agree that sounds better |
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complete release from stress Explanation: I don't think you could just say "complete release" as the French does, so you might like to add "from stress". I know stress is mentioned in the third sentence, though, so it's not ideal ... |
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Pure relaxation Explanation: You need to think short and snappy and straight to the point. If you don't want a verb, then this might be the solution. |
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