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13:10 Dec 11, 2014 |
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| Selected response from: Charles Davis Spain Local time: 19:57 | ||||||
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had something to do with the lack of improvement ... Explanation: Now that I've ploughed through and eliminated those extraneous negatives. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 27 mins (2014-12-11 13:37:46 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- And misguided use of "asymptomatic" when simple English would do. |
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was to some extent symptomatic of (= responsible for?) the lack of improvement Explanation: You can be forgiven for finding this confusing. There are three problems at least. One is straightforward: if the text you've been given is exactly as you've copied it, there are repetitions which must be errors. It should presumably read: "x felt that your second operation was likely to have been the result of an operative complication which required intervention and that this was not completely asymptomatic of the lack of improvement in your functional capacity." The second problem is the double negative of "not completely asymptomatic", which seems to me an unnecessarily elaborate way of putting it. It's rather like the expression "not unrelated to", which some people are fond of. Since "asymptomatic" means "non-symptomatic", "not completely asymptomatic" clearly means "somewhat symptomatic" or "symptomatic to some extent". So it is saying that the complication requiring a second operation, or the fact that this complication arose, is to some extent symptomatic of the lack of improvement in functional capacity. But here the third problem arises, in my opinion, because to me this doesn't really make sense. It would mean that the complication was indicative of or a sign of the lack of improvement. But common sense would suggest it's the other way round: the lack of improvement in functional capacity is surely observable, and the complication is not a sign or symptom of it but the cause of it. So I would suggest (tentatively, of course) that what they actually mean is "was to some extent responsible for" or "was to some extent the cause of" the lack of improvement. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 36 mins (2014-12-11 13:47:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- In practice, B D Finch is probably right; they probably don't mean anything more precise than that the complication had something to do with the lack of improvement. But I think the implication must be that the former caused the latter, and even without the convoluted double negative "symptomatic" is the wrong word. |
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