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00:43 Nov 4, 2014 |
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English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO] General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters / General | |||||
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| Selected response from: Taña Dalglish Jamaica Local time: 10:19 | ||||
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3 +4 | Thinking back ON .... |
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4 +2 | I am considering... |
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4 +1 | On reviewing |
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Discussion entries: 6 | |
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thinking back of I am considering... Explanation: I would rewrite the entire sentence thus: I am considering revising my research proposal to make the transition from the background section to the literature review section flow more naturally. The reason being that perhaps you may not want to sound as if you have doubts about your proposal. Also, I am always very careful about the use of "NOT, not, etc.". You can say the same thing without sounding negative. I hope I have made my point respectfully. Good luck! |
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1 hr confidence: peer agreement (net): +1
5 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +4
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