18:36 Jun 9, 2013 |
French to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Emma Paulay France Local time: 18:21 | ||||||
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the least ray of light Explanation: Like Lori, this is what I thought of as the meaning. See http://www.cnrtl.fr/definition/jour I E. c. 2 Toute ouverture, fissure, intervalle, qui laisse passer le jour, la lumière, dans un objet ou entre deux objets |
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the slightest pinhole of space, - lacuna, Explanation: "pinhole" may be too modern ; "lacuna" may be more fitting. |
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the minutest void Explanation: As if his instincts remark a void wherever she is absent. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 10 hrs (2013-06-10 05:33:15 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I chose "void" because it has an emotional connotation. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 hrs (2013-06-10 05:43:06 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- I interpret "le jour" here as existence itself, which for him is a threat to his bedtime monopoly. |
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the slightest exposure Explanation: I think he needs to be completely enveloped to feel safe and protected and so dreads the slightest exposure. |
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the slightest gap Explanation: normally a gap admitting daylight. By extension any gap. |
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