their inoffensive

English translation: I think there is something missing...

02:28 Dec 6, 2012
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Poetry & Literature
English term or phrase: their inoffensive
Question: isn't there something missing (a verb, like)?

It is not the least among the strange things bred by the intense artificialness of sea-usages, that while in the open air of the deck some officers will, upon provocation, bear themselves boldly and defyingly enough towards their commander; yet, ten to one, let those very officers the next moment go down to their customary dinner in that same commander's cabin, and straightway ------------------------their inoffensive, not to say deprecatory and humble air towards him, as he sits at the head of the table; ------------------------this is marvellous, sometimes most comical. Wherefore this difference? A problem? Perhaps not. To have been Belshazzar, King of Babylon; and to have been Belshazzar, not haughtily but courteously, therein certainly must have been some touch of mundane grandeur.
Michael Kislov
Russian Federation
Local time: 12:32
Selected answer:I think there is something missing...
Explanation:
I agree that there seems to be a verb missing in this sentence, such as "...straightaway ASSUME their inoffensive...". I cannot see how it makes grammatical sense without adding a word somewhere.
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Martin Riordan
Brazil
Local time: 06:32
Grading comment
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED
5not wishing to offend
David Hollywood
4I think there is something missing...
Martin Riordan


Discussion entries: 5





  

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8 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
I think there is something missing...


Explanation:
I agree that there seems to be a verb missing in this sentence, such as "...straightaway ASSUME their inoffensive...". I cannot see how it makes grammatical sense without adding a word somewhere.

Martin Riordan
Brazil
Local time: 06:32
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 42

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Tony M: Although it is odd, I don't think it is really 'wrong', in the context of creative writing.
5 hrs
  -> Yes, I have read the comments... He was a professional, after all! But is the semicolon appropriate?
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3 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
not wishing to offend


Explanation:
:)

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Note added at 6 mins (2012-12-06 02:35:37 GMT)
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i.e. unobjectionable (causing no harm or offence)

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Note added at 8 mins (2012-12-06 02:36:49 GMT)
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"offense" in US American English

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Note added at 11 mins (2012-12-06 02:40:23 GMT)
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and of coure there is something missing ...

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Note added at 12 mins (2012-12-06 02:40:49 GMT)
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of course

David Hollywood
Local time: 06:32
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 118

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Tony M: Although it is odd, I don't think it is really 'wrong', in the context of creative writing.
5 hrs
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