09:30 Jun 18, 2012 |
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4 +1 | based on the results of the first 4 months, it can be concluded that... |
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4 | results ... indicate that |
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based on the results of the first 4 months, it can be concluded that... Explanation: -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 mins (2012-06-18 09:33:34 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- of the first four months of (the year) 2012, чтобы быть точной -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 9 mins (2012-06-18 09:39:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Еще один вариант глагола: it can be inferred that... |
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results ... indicate that Explanation: In normal English prose, you can skip the "allow us to say", "give us the basis to conclude", etc. formulations. "Results for the first four months of 2012 indicate that..." If possibly, avoid "results", too. It might be "performance in", or "the numbers for", etc. |
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