those

23:32 Dec 4, 2011
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English to Chinese translations [PRO]
Tech/Engineering - IT (Information Technology) / consumerization of IT
English term or phrase: those
The needs of today's users have evolved past traditional computers and PDAs. Users require more versatile devices such as ***those*** offered by application-ready tablets and smartphones, as well as the cloud-based services those devices are designed with in mind. These devices and the services they use overlap personal and business use.
用户需要用途更广泛的设备,比如随时可以运行众多应用程序的平板电脑和智能手机所提供的XX,

感觉这句话缺乏逻辑,感觉改成下面这个更合理:
Users require more versatile devices such as application-ready tablets and smartphones
按原文,难道是平板电脑和智能手机再提供另一种设备不成?

这个those似乎是services才对,但是那样的话,more versatile devices such as services显然讲不通。
clearwater
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4看下面Explanation
Heju Huang
4those指的是those devices。
Yushu Fu
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Agree with asker
Francis Fine

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看下面Explanation


Explanation:
我同意你的看发。原文不是很完美。这里those也可以指那个needs,也就是service and/or application, 我觉得你可以就翻成服务或应用程序

Heju Huang
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1 day 5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
those指的是those devices。


Explanation:
可以成功能设计或工具。指tablet和smartphone里面能提供的各种工具或程序。

我的理解:是更方便用户随身携带这些设备里嵌入的比如 GPS功能, 上网, 视频聊天等等附加功能

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The asker has done a good job of edit the original sentence.

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