Strahlkraft entwickeln

English translation: radiates that 'special something'

06:35 Oct 20, 2011
German to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Marketing / Market Research
German term or phrase: Strahlkraft entwickeln
Durch ein ideal auf die Branche abgestimmtes Werbe- und Marketingkonzept entwickelt die
AGRARIA eine besondere Strahlkraft – auch über die Grenzen Österreichs hinaus.

Due to an advertising and marketing concept which is ideally adjusted to the industry the AGRARIA develops a special attraction - reaching far beyond the borders of Austria??.

Vielen Dank!
martina1974
Austria
Local time: 08:14
English translation:radiates that 'special something'
Explanation:
Re. your translation:

I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).

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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:

managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something
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Lirka
Austria
Local time: 08:14
Grading comment
vielen Dank!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +3has a (special) magnetism
Susan Welsh
3 +2radiates that 'special something'
Lirka
4to develop radiant power
Emily Weidmann
3Agraria's impact
Wendy Streitparth
3ability to captivate the atteiton of...
Raghunathan Rajagopalan


  

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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
radiates that 'special something'


Explanation:
Re. your translation:

I'd omit "developed", especially in the present tense! (the use of the present tense in such context is very German).

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Note added at 20 mins (2011-10-20 06:56:24 GMT)
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or, if you want to use 'develop', say sth like:

managed to develop the ability to radiate that special something


Lirka
Austria
Local time: 08:14
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 12
Grading comment
vielen Dank!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Zareh Darakjian Ph.D.: I liked it!
10 mins
  -> Thanks a lot, Zareh :):)

agree  Ingeborg Gowans (X): well-put
5 hrs
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Agraria's impact


Explanation:
radiates far beyond.......

Wendy Streitparth
Germany
Local time: 08:14
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 28
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
has a (special) magnetism


Explanation:
I was thinking "a special sparkle," but the alliteration strikes me as too trite. Definitely get rid of "develop," as zirka says. And some other changes would be good, along the lines of:

Agraria's advertising and marketing concept, which is ideally suited to the industry, has a special magnetism that reaches far beyond the borders of Austria.


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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-10-20 12:09:06 GMT)
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I'm sorry, "lirka," not "zirka." Zirka is somebody else. :-)

Susan Welsh
United States
Local time: 02:14
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Ramey Rieger (X): Yes, magnetism - they're looking to attract visitors. Well done! What ever became of mittlerer?
1 hr
  -> Thanks, Ramey. (No feedback from client yet on "mittlerer." I'll let you know!)

agree  oa_xxx (X): or appeal
11 hrs
  -> Thanks, orla

agree  Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
3 days 0 min
  -> Thank you, Harald
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10 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
to develop radiant power


Explanation:
developing electric power

Example sentence(s):
  • To develop radiant power was the primary goal.

    Reference: http://www.linguee.com
Emily Weidmann
Germany
Local time: 08:14
Native speaker of: Native in GermanGerman
PRO pts in category: 4
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3 days 10 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
ability to captivate the atteiton of...


Explanation:
has developed the ability (technique) to capture the attention of...

sort of a magnetic appeal to capture the attention that reaches far beyond the borders....


    Reference: http://tarrantyouthcamp.com/personalities-drama.html
Raghunathan Rajagopalan
Local time: 11:44
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 2
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