未对“两高”及环保贷款数据以及能耗数据进行披露

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07:43 Jun 26, 2011

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Chinese term or phrase: 未对“两高”及环保贷款数据以及能耗数据进行披露

xx银行未成立专责部门管理绿色信贷事务，也未对“两高”及环保贷款数据以及能耗数据进行披露。需加强对可持续发展及绿色信贷理念的认识及实践。

... the bank ... did not disclose any data about its loans to energy inefficient and highly polluting or environmental protection industries, nor about its energy consumption.

My question mainly concerns the usage of "or" and "nor".
I translated it as the above, but am not quite sure if the "or" and "nor" were used appropriately.

Note: "两高" refers to "高能耗“and "高污染”

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English translation:see my explanation

Explanation:
(the bank neither...), nor discloses/releases any data on high energy consumption, high pollution and environmental protection loans.

the usage of "neither ... nor" helps you to build a clearer structure in this sentence

高能耗http://www.google.com.hk/#num=30&hl=zh-CN&safe=strict&sa=X&e...
高污染http://www.google.com.hk/#num=30&hl=zh-CN&safe=strict&q="hig...
环保贷款http://www.google.com.hk/#num=30&hl=zh-CN&safe=strict&biw=10...

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Ivan Niu
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Asker: Thanks for your comments. The problem is there are three negations (...未，未，及...)...

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