11:22 Jun 13, 2011 |
French to English translations [PRO] Art/Literary - Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting / sculpture | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Helen Shiner United Kingdom Local time: 02:36 | ||||||
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eternal in what it portrays Explanation: Could conversation be what it portrays? Glass definitely does not 'speak' in English. |
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portrays the same message Explanation: expresses the same message |
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conducts an everlasting dialogue Explanation: As in, the "dialogue" that is created between the piece and the viewer is powerful, in contrast to the fragility of the glass, and never wanes; there are of course many different words you can use for "éternel", I suggest "everlasting" as I like the strong contrast with fragility... |
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speaks to us of eternity Explanation: extremely fragile, it nevertheless speaks to us of eternity Just another option among many. |
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it ceaselessly conveys the artist's message over the centuries Explanation: mostly because the colours do not fade out... |
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ever-present in his discourse Explanation: Would that do? See my discussion post. This duality or tension seems to be the subject / leitmotif / recurring theme of the artist's work. |
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18 mins confidence: peer agreement (net): +2
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