would have been my choice to keep

Chinese translation: (这个型号我)宁愿作为个人保留型号;宁愿留作私房;宁愿留作己用

00:46 Apr 23, 2011
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Tech/Engineering - IT (Information Technology) / lightweight laptops
English term or phrase: would have been my choice to keep
Of all the laptops reviewed in our Test center in the past year, this model ***would have been my choice to keep***.
在我们测试中心去年测评的所有笔记本电脑中,这款机子***可能是我钟爱的选择***。
觉得不满意。
clearwater
China
Local time: 05:22
Chinese translation:(这个型号我)宁愿作为个人保留型号;宁愿留作私房;宁愿留作己用
Explanation:
虚拟语气
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Linguist Laureate
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Local time: 05:22
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Summary of answers provided
4(这个型号我)宁愿作为个人保留型号;宁愿留作私房;宁愿留作己用
Linguist Laureate
4是我会选用的
Talkington
4我可能会选择此型号
Ivan Niu


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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
(这个型号我)宁愿作为个人保留型号;宁愿留作私房;宁愿留作己用


Explanation:
虚拟语气

Linguist Laureate
China
Local time: 05:22
Native speaker of: Chinese
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谢谢!
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
是我会选用的


Explanation:
我觉得把后半句语序调整一下会更好,整句翻译成:...,我个人会选用这一款机器。

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Note added at 5 hrs (2011-04-23 06:26:01 GMT)
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刚看了楼上的答案,觉得他说的“这个型号”比“这款机子”更好一些。

Talkington
Local time: 14:22
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23 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
我可能会选择此型号


Explanation:
this model would have been my choice to keep.
我觉得可以用“我”(而不用model)为主语来处理这个句子:我可能会选择此型号。通顺一点。

Ivan Niu
China
Local time: 05:22
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Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese
PRO pts in category: 248
Notes to answerer
Asker: keep的意思没有翻译出来。

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