disparition

English translation: disappearance

07:36 May 20, 2010
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English term or phrase: disparition
Starck with Fossils sees the development of watches incarnating the elegance of intelligence by proposing the minimum in the way of "disparition".

Besides, I also do not understand the preposition "with". Should it be "in"?
Bin Tiede (X)
Germany
Local time: 18:54
Selected answer:disappearance
Explanation:
Looking into this, it's probably "Fossil by Starck", and "disaparition" is a French word, which also exists in English, meaning "disappearance".

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Note added at 12 mins (2010-05-20 07:48:33 GMT)
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This is the most helpful ref I found (in French): http://www.leguide.net/go/search/idx/6090000/mot/Philippe_st...

My small French dictionary and my large English dictionary concur that the word means "disappearance".
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disappearance


Explanation:
Looking into this, it's probably "Fossil by Starck", and "disaparition" is a French word, which also exists in English, meaning "disappearance".

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Note added at 12 mins (2010-05-20 07:48:33 GMT)
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This is the most helpful ref I found (in French): http://www.leguide.net/go/search/idx/6090000/mot/Philippe_st...

My small French dictionary and my large English dictionary concur that the word means "disappearance".

David Knowles
Local time: 17:54
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 12
Grading comment
Thank you all.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Catharine Cellier-Smart: "Fossil" by Stark doesn't get any G-hits, don't know if "Starck with Fossils" is meant to be but it gets a handful of g-hits. Disappearance may not be the best translation of disparition here, maybe why original translator of the text left "disparition"
4 mins

neutral  writeaway: disparition has many meanings in French, including vanishing.
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37 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
rephrase it


Explanation:
Not hard to find the reference to Stark with Fossil, see below.

The phrase "by proposing the minimum in the way of 'disparition'"makes little sense in English, so I suggest:

"by offering a minimalism that verges on disappearance/invisibility".


    Reference: http://www.fossil.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/CategoryView...
B D Finch
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  cmwilliams (X): yes, it's practically invisible. http://www.productwiki.com/philippe-starck-veiled-watch/
3 mins
  -> Thanks cmw

agree  Sheila Wilson: It definitely needs rephrasing. Frankly, I don't understand it at all. I wonder if the author did?
12 mins
  -> Thanks Sheila

agree  Armorel Young: well done for making sense of it
19 mins
  -> Thanks Armorel

agree  ibz: Absolutely! I translated the same text into German and had to rephrase it considerably ...
50 mins
  -> Thanks ibz
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Reference comments


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Reference information:
I think it's a reference to this type of watch:

Philippe Starck designed the Veiled watch for Fossil as part of his ongoing collaboration project with the industrious watch-making company. The Veiled Watch is an impressive design feat for a watch as it barely looks like a functioning timepiece with the almost invisible hands ticking away on the stainless steel band..

http://www.productwiki.com/philippe-starck-veiled-watch/



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Note added at 7 hrs (2010-05-20 15:11:40 GMT)
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I've found another English version of this text which may be helpful.

Starck with Fossil watches symbolise the elegance of intelligence when pared down to the strict minimum.

http://www.irhawards.com/Honorees/Philippe_Starck_Designerof...

cmwilliams (X)
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