Le Cellier X vous propose ses vins ...
English translation: Cellier X presents its wines
| 05:45 May 3, 2010 |
| French to English translations [Non-PRO] Marketing - Wine / Oenology / Viticulture | |||||||
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|  Selected response from: Mark Nathan France Local time: 21:35 | ||||||
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| 4 +3 | Fine wines from Cellier X |
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| 2 +1 | Cellier X presents its wines |
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| 3 | Cellier X offers you its wines... |
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| 3 | Cellier X - Our wines |
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peer agreement (net): +1
peer agreement (net): +1Cellier X presents its wines Explanation: As Tony says, not sure if you want to translate Cellier, which might be X Wine Merchants - but again, a bit more context would be helpful. |
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Cellier X offers you its wines... Explanation: More context would have certainly been much appreciated. Cellier - wine cellar |
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7 hrs confidence: peer agreement (net): +3
peer agreement (net): +3Fine wines from Cellier X Explanation: Would I think have a more natural ring about it in EN; those as Writeaway so rightly says, it really does all depend on the target market segment, and style / register of the rest of the text. You might also wish to consider: "Fine wines on offer from Cellier X" — personally, I don't think there's any real need to slavishly keep 'offer' in there, and also, 'on offer' might be misinterpreted as 'on special offer' |
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