2010

English translation: turn the sentence around

23:13 Feb 1, 2010
English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO]
Art/Literary - General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
English term or phrase: 2010
I am translating a text in which there is a sentence that starts with the number of the year [2010 was the year chosen to be etc.]. My question is: in English (UK, or perhaps European EN) is okay to star a sentence with a number or should I spell it?
Thanks
Paula Vaz-Carreiro
Selected answer:turn the sentence around
Explanation:
Most style guides that I have read state that no sentence should start with digits. From experience, on exams (for translation, editing, transcription) that would be marked as an error.

In this case, most style guides recommend turning the sentence around. So it would be "The year 2010 was chosen to be..."

There are lots of online references on this.
http://www.50degreesnorth.com/docs/numbers.pdf
Selected response from:

Michelle Temple
Canada
Local time: 11:58
Grading comment
Thanks Michelle. I had a sneaking suspicion that rephrasing was the recommended thing in EN. Thanks to all other contributors too.
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4 +14turn the sentence around
Michelle Temple
5 +2it is ok.
Charlesp
2 +4I think so
Jack Doughty


Discussion entries: 5





  

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13 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 2/5Answerer confidence 2/5 peer agreement (net): +4
I think so


Explanation:
My native language is UK English, and though I would never start a sentence with a 1-, 2-, or even 3-digit number, 2010 looks OK to me.
But I'm not sure if there's a rigid rule on the subject.

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 18:58
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 370

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Polangmar
35 mins
  -> Thank you.

agree  Yasutomo Kanazawa
1 hr
  -> Thank you.

agree  Christine Andersen: For what it´s worth, Danes are told that a year is the one exception to the English dislike of starting a sentence with figures. Write ´Thirty wise men...´ etc. etc. or rephrase, but a year is an element that ´cannot´ be spelled out.
9 hrs
  -> Thank you. Yes, I think you're right. "1,000,000 Frenchmen can't be wrong" would look wrong to me. It would have to be "One million (or a million) Frenchmen can't be wrong".

agree  Filippe Vasconcellos de Freitas Guimarães: Looks natural, sounds natural = go for it.
10 hrs
  -> Thank you.
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47 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +14
turn the sentence around


Explanation:
Most style guides that I have read state that no sentence should start with digits. From experience, on exams (for translation, editing, transcription) that would be marked as an error.

In this case, most style guides recommend turning the sentence around. So it would be "The year 2010 was chosen to be..."

There are lots of online references on this.
http://www.50degreesnorth.com/docs/numbers.pdf

Michelle Temple
Canada
Local time: 11:58
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
Grading comment
Thanks Michelle. I had a sneaking suspicion that rephrasing was the recommended thing in EN. Thanks to all other contributors too.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Polangmar
2 mins

agree  Yasutomo Kanazawa
35 mins

agree  Laurie Price: as an editor, I think this is the only correct option
1 hr

agree  Robert Forstag: I think that The New York Times sanctions the practice, but in general starting sentences with digits is forbidden in style guides. It also looks odd, even in informal writing.
1 hr

agree  Jennifer Levey
1 hr

agree  Patricia Townshend (X)
3 hrs

agree  patyjs
4 hrs

agree  William [Bill] Gray: In formal texts, it definitely looks better if you turn the text to avoid an initial number.
4 hrs

agree  kmtext
8 hrs

neutral  Christine Andersen: ´The year 2010 promises to be a year of...´ or ´was chosen to be the year of...´ Watch out for tautology! I would happily start with the year in figures, and I think it looks very ´Victorian´ to spell it out :-)
9 hrs

agree  cmwilliams (X)
10 hrs

agree  Filippe Vasconcellos de Freitas Guimarães: Also an excellent approach, as long as the sentence is really turned around instead of merely prepending it with "The year..."
10 hrs

agree  lindaellen (X)
11 hrs

agree  Rolf Keiser
14 hrs

agree  Deborah Workman
1 day 2 hrs
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8 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +2
it is ok.


Explanation:
... but the grammar/style rule that a sentence may not begin with a numeral, ie it has to be spelled out. 2 ... = Two...

However, for a year, it might be odd to spell it out. And as this Literary, take some literary license.

Charlesp
Sweden
Local time: 19:58
Works in field
Native speaker of: English

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Oliver Lawrence: Assuming that 2010 is a year not a number per se, it is absolutely fine, natural and correct to start with it, e.g. there is nothing whatsoever wrong with "2010 promises to be a year of tentative economic recovery".
1 hr
  -> Yes, I agree.

agree  Filippe Vasconcellos de Freitas Guimarães: Yes. Unless the client has a specific house style against the practice, treating this as any other figure is undue prescriptivism.
2 hrs
  -> Yes, I agree entirely, and thanks for the new word "prescriptivism".
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