08:45 May 20, 2009 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Marketing - Advertising / Public Relations / Custome Surveys | |||||||
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what would you like xxx to be known for? What are you looking for in ... Explanation: What are you looking for in a financial services company? |
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what would you like xxx to be known for? what do you think is the best feature of xxx? Explanation: Assuming that if they think Y is the best feature, then that is what they think it deserves to be known for by others. |
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what would you like xxx to be known for? What is the feature you would absolutely expect to find in... Explanation: Provided the original doesn't sound so clunky to me, and I am the picky type of guy, I tried an alternative. I'm saying I don't find it clunky because I don't find a clunky one the Italian equivalent, which is in use: "Per che cosa vorresti che fosse nota la ditta XXX?" Maurizio |
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what would you like xxx to be known for? What should be XXX's distinguishing quality? Explanation: another suggestion :) |
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what would you like xxx to be known for? What you like best of/in XXX? Explanation: Just another way. |
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