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5 | alternate strata |
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5 | alternative strata material |
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3 | sequential/alternating strata |
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alternative strata alternate strata Explanation: See request for clarification. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2009-04-05 11:11:18 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "16 Oct 2004 ... The soil is a clayey loam, with sand and rubble stone, in alternate strata, situate near the surface." [The History and Antiquities of the ..." met.open.ac.uk/GENUKI/big/eng/BKM/Dunton/Index.html "The terrace or line of hill which skirts the western and northern coasts, shows its alluvial origin from the alternate strata from sand and clay observable ..." www.btinternet.com/~ardersier/matheson.htm "The stream passes over the waterfall the Spout of Ballagan which shows 192 alternate strata of coloured shales and limestone (including pure alabaster). ..." www.scotland2.co.uk/html/strathblane.html |
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alternative strata sequential/alternating strata Explanation: A suggestion, as i think what you probably mean is 'alternating' not 'alternative'. I would also change the sentence order slightly, so that it read something like To quarry the fill material for the dam body, the slightly weathered part of the sequential strata of sandstone and sandstone slate available..... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2009-04-05 11:31:37 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Alternating strata of Carboniferous limestones, sandstones and shales give the topography a stepped, horizontal grain. Millstone Grits cap the higher fells ... www.durham.gov.uk/landscape/usp.nsf/pws/landscape Character... The West Berlin map gives 2 typifications: a sand and pebble mantle with interstratified or with alternating strata of boulder clay and boulder marl. ... www.stadtentwicklung.berlin.de/umwelt/umweltatlas/ed205_03.... - 32k - |
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alternative strata alternative strata material Explanation: Try this.. To quarry the fill material for the dam body, the slightly weathered part of the sandstone and sandstone slate alternative strata material available from the immediate vicinity of the project area, is exceptionally well suited for use in dam construction. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 56 mins (2009-04-05 10:29:45 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The sandstone would be accessed on its compaction abilities, and samples of the sandstone from an alternative strata, which is in the same area, has been deemed to be suitable. You couldn't use "dam wall construction" as this may not be what it is good for, they could be just saying it is good for fill, it could be good for porosity, (clay content) if it had "dam wall construction' you would change "use in" to "use with" -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 6 days (2009-04-12 04:37:09 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Thank You |
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