arrêts-buffets

English translation: the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave

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French term or phrase:arrêts-buffets
English translation:the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave
Entered by: Steve Melling

11:24 Jan 6, 2009
French to English translations [PRO]
Ships, Sailing, Maritime / yachts
French term or phrase: arrêts-buffets
Quoi que je fasse, le bateau tape dans les vagues avec des arrêts-buffets au passage, et ce n'est pas génial!
Steve Melling
France
Local time: 02:26
the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave
Explanation:
I suggest "Whatever I try to do, the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave and it's no picnic".
Selected response from:

Mark Bossanyi
Bulgaria
Local time: 03:26
Grading comment
This is the one I used. Bourth's answer may well be right but I think it only fair to award the points to Mark.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
4 +2is buffeted violently as it slams into the waves
Bourth (X)
3 +2the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave
Mark Bossanyi
4slamming into the waves
Graham macLachlan
4sudden standstills
kashew
3halting every now and then
solejnicz
3with a stop-start motion
ArabellaCE (X)


  

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23 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +2
the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave


Explanation:
I suggest "Whatever I try to do, the boat judders to a halt when it slams into each wave and it's no picnic".

Mark Bossanyi
Bulgaria
Local time: 03:26
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
This is the one I used. Bourth's answer may well be right but I think it only fair to award the points to Mark.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  SueE: That's very good! Explains what's happening perfectly.
12 mins

agree  Nicky Over: Expresses it really well!
16 mins

neutral  solejnicz: I do not really see "into EACH wave" in the French text
24 mins

neutral  kashew: I agree with Stefan.
1 hr
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42 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
halting every now and then


Explanation:
It is clear that "arrêts-buffets au passage" has a figurative meaning, so you could translate the whole phrase for example as: "The boat slams into the waves, halting every now and then".



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Note added at 49 min (2009-01-06 12:14:29 GMT)
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Or perhaps: "..., juddering to a halt"

Example sentence(s):
  • Je ne sais plus si je dois aller vite ou pas parce que, quoi que je fasse de toute façon, le bateau tape dans les vagues avec des arrêts-buffets au passage, ...
  • Right now I have 23 knots and rising and there is lots of banging as the boat slams into the waves

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solejnicz
Netherlands
Local time: 02:26
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench, Native in DutchDutch

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  kashew: I can't vote against myself, but I like your version!
1 hr
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
slamming into the waves


Explanation:
I wouldn't translate it too literally

The boat began slamming into the waves, causing discomfort and slowing our progress. By nightfall we were still miles from home. Today your mother remembers ...
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... pounding banging, stuffing, slamming into the waves that any man in his right ... If you are considering a new boat, stop! Get a Lake and Bay and save ...
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BT yacht. Seb Josse has had a rough ride to stay at the head of the race ... the boat movements are quite hard - constantly slamming into the waves - so ...
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Note added at 1 hr (2009-01-06 12:55:59 GMT)
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Slam
5. verb intrans. Move violently or loudly; crash; Nautical (of a boat) crash into (the trough of) a wave; plunge or pitch. Foll. by around, through, etc. L20.
OED

Graham macLachlan
Local time: 02:26
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 352

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
disagree  solejnicz: Only "slamming into the waves " is too little. It does not reflect the meaning of 'arrets-buffets".
43 mins
  -> it certainly does

agree  Bourth (X): I like slamming (I like Grand Corps Malade too) but also feel it needs intensifying, since a boat could also slam THROUGH a wave. Inspiration taken ...
1 hr
  -> thanks, yes but I get the impression that these waves are not slam-throughable
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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
sudden standstills


Explanation:

"... the boat being brought sometimes to a sudden standstill."

Standstill = Inability to proceed, stopped.
Compare with the Rugby term Fr. arrêt-buffet, plaquage net et brutal.

kashew
France
Local time: 02:26
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 66
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with a stop-start motion


Explanation:
another suggestion

ArabellaCE (X)
United Kingdom
Local time: 01:26
Native speaker of: English
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
is buffeted violently as it slams into the waves


Explanation:
slams into and is buffeted by the waves, etc.

buffet ...[-(O)Fr. buffeter, f. buffet - stool, bench, table ... 1.b. To beat back, contend with (waves, etc.) ...
[SOED]

Bourth (X)
Local time: 02:26
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 142

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Graham macLachlan: perhaps "keeps slamming into the waves, buffeting terribly"
12 mins

agree  nnaemeka Odimegwu: tink agree
20 hrs
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