Line from Verdi's Traviata

English translation: Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul, And may God pardon and make her his own!

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Italian term or phrase:Line from Verdi's Traviata
English translation:Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul, And may God pardon and make her his own!
Entered by: Nicole Johnson

07:31 Oct 20, 2008
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Art/Literary - Music / Opera - La Traviata
Italian term or phrase: Line from Verdi's Traviata
I need to translate a line from La Traviata. Any opera aficionados out there who can lend me a hand or direct me to a link that may provide an answer?

This is the portion that needs to be translated:

"Ah della traviata sorridi al desìo
a lei deh perdona, tu accoglila, o Dio"

Thanks in advance.
Nicole Johnson
Italy
Local time: 15:59
Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul, And may God pardon and make her his own!
Explanation:
La versione che ti propongo è tratta dal sito http://www.opera-guide.ch/opern_komponisten.php?uilang=en&fi... che racchiude gran parte di opere liriche offrendo Synopsis e Libretto in più lingue:

Farewell, happy dreams of by?gone days;
The roses in my cheeks already are faded.
Even Alfredo's love is lacking,
To comfort and uphold my weary spirit.
____Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul,____
____And may God pardon and make her his own!____
Ah, all is over,
All is over now.
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Silvia Nigretto
Local time: 15:59
Grading comment
Thanks to everyone. I decided on this version, but they were all very helpful.
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Summary of answers provided
5Line from Verdi's Traviata
emackinnon
4Grant the wish of one who has strayed; forgive her, oh God, that she may come to thee!
Fiorsam
3Oh God, grant pardon to this fallen woman for whom life is ending
Julius Iannitti
3Ah! Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred...
Sarah Jane Webb
3Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul, And may God pardon and make her his own!
Silvia Nigretto


  

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Oh God, grant pardon to this fallen woman for whom life is ending


Explanation:
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    Reference: http://www.columbia.edu/itc/music/reserves/traviata.html
Julius Iannitti
Italy
Local time: 15:59
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Native speaker of: Italian
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Line from Verdi\\\'s Traviata
Ah! Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred...


Explanation:
This is what I've been able to find:



Ah! Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred; / Oh, pardon her, ...... within the 'false glow' of major: 'Delia traviata sorridi al desio' - an extrava - ...
journals.cambridge.org/production/action/cjoGetFulltext?fulltextid=1788916

My suggestions:
Ah! Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred; / Oh, pardon her, ...
and welcome her, dear God
(this may be a suitable conclusion)

hth

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Note added at 36 mins (2008-10-20 08:07:57 GMT)
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Ah! Here it is!

Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred; / Oh, pardon her, receive her, O God! / Now all is ended. / Joys and sorrows will soon end, ...
links.jstor.org/sici?sici=0954-5867(198911)1%3A3%3C249%3AGACIMV%3..

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Note added at 40 mins (2008-10-20 08:11:36 GMT)
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Oops - that "Ah!" somehow got transferred to the line above :-(
That should have been:
Here it is!

Ah! Smile upon the desire of the woman who erred; / Oh, pardon her, receive her, O God! / Now all is ended. / Joys and sorrows will soon end, ...



Sarah Jane Webb
Local time: 15:59
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Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul, And may God pardon and make her his own!


Explanation:
La versione che ti propongo è tratta dal sito http://www.opera-guide.ch/opern_komponisten.php?uilang=en&fi... che racchiude gran parte di opere liriche offrendo Synopsis e Libretto in più lingue:

Farewell, happy dreams of by?gone days;
The roses in my cheeks already are faded.
Even Alfredo's love is lacking,
To comfort and uphold my weary spirit.
____Oh, comfort, sustain an erring soul,____
____And may God pardon and make her his own!____
Ah, all is over,
All is over now.


Silvia Nigretto
Local time: 15:59
Native speaker of: Native in ItalianItalian
PRO pts in category: 4
Grading comment
Thanks to everyone. I decided on this version, but they were all very helpful.
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
Grant the wish of one who has strayed; forgive her, oh God, that she may come to thee!


Explanation:
One more...

Fiorsam
United States
Local time: 09:59
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29 days   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
Line from Verdi's Traviata


Explanation:
I am singing this role right now, so I've spent a lot of time studying the libretto. I know I'm being nit-picky, but the precise translation is as follows:
"Ah, of the fallen woman who smiled at desire;
To her give pardon, and welcome her, oh God."

emackinnon
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