Ох, рано встает охрана

English translation: The early bird gets the germ.

18:59 Jul 21, 2008
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / PUNS
Russian term or phrase: Ох, рано встает охрана
This is a subtitle in a chapter about the immune system. The author likes using puns and witty expressions. The word охрана here apparently implies that the immune system protects the body from diseases, etc, while рано not only hints that we need this protection as soon as possible/early, but together with an interjection "ох" also makes a lovely pun. I would appreciate your ideas on how to solve this problem. Intuitively, I feel I need to distance myself from the original pun and come up with something creative (and different) in English, but in order to do this I need something more than just intuition... ;-) LOL ... Thanks in advance for your suggestions.
Roman Ivashkiv
Local time: 13:59
English translation:The early bird gets the germ.
Explanation:
Usually it's "gets the worm" so it's also a pun.

Or even, The early cell gets the germ?
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Deborah Hoffman
Local time: 15:59
Grading comment
Thank you very much, Deborah. Also, thanks to everybody for your creative insights.
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Summary of answers provided
5 +9The early bird gets the germ.
Deborah Hoffman
4if immune system failed, you won't be bailed
Eric Candle
3The bodyguard that never lets its guard down
Mark Berelekhis
2your guard is working hard
Ekaterina Filatova


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your guard is working hard


Explanation:
:)))

Ekaterina Filatova
Netherlands
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
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25 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
The bodyguard that never lets its guard down


Explanation:
I think that Katya is on the right track.

Mark Berelekhis
United States
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Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian, Native in EnglishEnglish
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49 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +9
The early bird gets the germ.


Explanation:
Usually it's "gets the worm" so it's also a pun.

Or even, The early cell gets the germ?

Deborah Hoffman
Local time: 15:59
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 36
Grading comment
Thank you very much, Deborah. Also, thanks to everybody for your creative insights.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  N Watterson (X): Very clever :)
11 mins
  -> Spasibo :)

agree  Tevah_Trans: This is super cute!!
32 mins
  -> Spasibo!

agree  Tatiana Lammers: so witty!
6 hrs
  -> Aw, shucks...

agree  Kameliya
6 hrs

agree  Dorene Cornwell: I like it but I would feel more secure if I knew the section it is a subtitle for is specifically about first stage immune defenses
7 hrs

agree  Aleksey Chervinskiy
8 hrs

agree  Arkadi Burkov
9 hrs

agree  Sofiya Skachko: smart!
13 hrs

agree  svetlana cosquéric
1 day 22 hrs
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
if immune system failed, you won't be bailed


Explanation:
mini poem

Eric Candle
Local time: 15:59
Works in field
Native speaker of: Russian
PRO pts in category: 32
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