выскочить (игра слов)

English translation: I'll smack you so hard...

04:07 Mar 2, 2006
Russian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Russian term or phrase: выскочить (игра слов)
- Ах ты, пень глухой! Вынь сперва пробки из ушей, тогда и будем разговаривать! - огрызнулся Лешак.
- Ты что, голос сорвал? - рассердился Топотун. - Бубнишь чего-то себе под нос!
- Это я бубню? - рассвирепел Лешак. - Вот сейчас как тресну тебя по макушке, чтоб пробки из ушей ***выскочили!***
- Кто ***выскочил?*** Где? - Топотун принялся испуганно озираться по сторонам.

Dear colleagues!
Пытаюсь найти способ передать игру слов, но пока что не очень выходит. Может, кто подкинет наводящую мысль?
(Герой не расслышал слов собеседника, поэтому по-своему воспринял слово “выскочить”.)
I’ll appreciate any suggestions.
Andrew Vdovin
Local time: 20:37
English translation:I'll smack you so hard...
Explanation:
Other word play might work:


-- I'll smack you so hard it'll knock those plugs out of your ears!

-- Thugs? What thugs? Where?




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Note added at 4 hrs (2006-03-02 08:46:30 GMT)
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Or:

-- I'll smack you so hard your earplugs will go flying!

-- Crying? Who's crying? Where?

Or:

-- I'll smack you so hard those plugs will go shooting out!

-- Who's shooting!? Where?
Selected response from:

Kevin Kelly
Local time: 09:37
Grading comment
Very good suggestions, Kevin! Thank you very much! Thanks everybody!!!
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
5 +4knock
Deborah Hoffman
3 +4pop out
Mark Vaintroub
4 +2I'll smack you so hard...
Kevin Kelly
3I'll whap you on your head to get the wax out of your ears
GaryG
3jump out
Sergei_A
3пробки .....dropped out
Andrey Belousov (X)


Discussion entries: 5





  

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9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
pop out


Explanation:
Definitions of pop out on the Web:

- appear suddenly; "Spring popped up everywhere in the valley"
- start: bulge outward; "His eyes popped"
- exit briefly; "He popped out for a quick coffee break"
- come out suddenly or forcefully; "you stick a bill in the vending machine and the change pops out"
wordnet.princeton.edu/perl/webwn

Mark Vaintroub
Canada
Local time: 09:37
Native speaker of: Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Aleksandr Okunev (X)
1 hr
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agree  Irina Gerunova
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agree  Dilshod Madolimov
13 hrs
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agree  Olga Vlasova: My first thought exactly.
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13 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
I'll whap you on your head to get the wax out of your ears


Explanation:
We usually refer to someone having wax in their ears if they're not hearing well, not having a cork.

I'm rendering this colloquially, hence "whap"

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Note added at 2006-03-02 04:22:01 (GMT)
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I suppose I should have kept with the imagery and said \"...to get the wax to pop out of your ears\"

GaryG
Local time: 09:37
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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15 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
jump out


Explanation:
or fly out

Sergei_A
Local time: 09:37
Native speaker of: Russian
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15 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
пробки .....dropped out


Explanation:
"- Who dropped out? Where?"
I suspect this might do the trick...

Andrey Belousov (X)
United States
Local time: 09:37
Native speaker of: Russian
PRO pts in category: 114
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24 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +4
knock


Explanation:
"I'll give you such a smack on the head it'll knock the wax out of your ears!"

"Knock? Who knocked? Where?"

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Note added at 25 mins (2006-03-02 04:32:55 GMT)
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Thus it can work into the pun created by Tolotun's hearing problem.

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Note added at 29 mins (2006-03-02 04:36:30 GMT)
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" It'll knock the wax out of your ears, that's for sure."
http://www.rollingstone.com/artist/bio/_/id/15658/killswitch...

"The new .500 S&W magnum, guaranteed to knock the wax out of your ears and maybe loosen a few fillings."
http://michigan-sportsman.com/forum/printthread.php?t=38589



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Note added at 30 mins (2006-03-02 04:37:48 GMT)
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Actually I just read more closely above and it should be "knock those earplugs out of your ears." But the igra slov still works.

Deborah Hoffman
Local time: 09:37
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 36

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Henry Schroeder: if Andrew wants the verb at the end for the word play, I suppose you could say ...head that your earplugs will be knocked out, although "out" still has to be the last word and it doesn't sound as natural as your active sentence.
1 hr

agree  Dorene Cornwell
2 hrs

agree  Simon Hollingsworth
3 hrs

agree  Dilshod Madolimov
13 hrs
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
I'll smack you so hard...


Explanation:
Other word play might work:


-- I'll smack you so hard it'll knock those plugs out of your ears!

-- Thugs? What thugs? Where?




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Note added at 4 hrs (2006-03-02 08:46:30 GMT)
--------------------------------------------------

Or:

-- I'll smack you so hard your earplugs will go flying!

-- Crying? Who's crying? Where?

Or:

-- I'll smack you so hard those plugs will go shooting out!

-- Who's shooting!? Where?

Kevin Kelly
Local time: 09:37
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 80
Grading comment
Very good suggestions, Kevin! Thank you very much! Thanks everybody!!!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Erzsébet Czopyk
29 mins
  -> Thank you, Erzsebet.

agree  Dilshod Madolimov
11 hrs
  -> Thank you, Dilshod.
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