rielar

English translation: The murmur that shudders in the sands

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Spanish term or phrase:rielar
English translation:The murmur that shudders in the sands
Entered by: Elena Robles Sanjuan

15:13 Feb 7, 2006
Spanish to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Spanish term or phrase: rielar
It appears in a poem.
"Hay una melodía del silencio
mágica y sublime
en este suelo...

surge de las aguas que rielan su murmullo
en las arenas del Atlántico sureño"

I asked the poet and she said "rielar" here is not "glitter" but something like "vibrate". I don't like "vibrate" here though. I'm looking for a nice transitive verb that implies both movement and the sound of breaking waves. Any suggestions?
Thanks a lot.
Cecilia Aguila
Local time: 16:08
[the murmur that shudders in the sands...
Explanation:
Surge de las aguas que rielan su murmullo en las arenas...

"Rielar" (Diccionario de Maria Moliner) : temblar con el movimiento de las aguas una luz que se refleja en ellas.
"Murmur" puede llevar implícito el significado de agua, que después además se entiende por el Atlántico.
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Elena Robles Sanjuan
Local time: 21:08
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Sorry for the delay. I've had some problems with my Internet connection lately. Thank you all. All your options have been very helpful.







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Summary of answers provided
4sparkle
Margarita Ezquerra (Smart Translators, S.L.)
4wave/shake/quaver/wriggle
Ricardo Basaez
4quiver
Paola Giardina
4the murmuring waters twinkle against the sands
Barbara Cochran, MFA
4tremble
Denise DeVries
3reflect
Dolores Vázquez
3whose murmur laps against the sands ...
peter jackson
3pulsate / undulate / sway (here)
franglish
1[the murmur that shudders in the sands...
Elena Robles Sanjuan


  

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sparkle


Explanation:
Suerte

Margarita Ezquerra (Smart Translators, S.L.)
Spain
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reflect


Explanation:
Podría ser:surge de las aguas que reflejan su murmullo...


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Dolores Vázquez
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[the murmur that shudders in the sands...


Explanation:
Surge de las aguas que rielan su murmullo en las arenas...

"Rielar" (Diccionario de Maria Moliner) : temblar con el movimiento de las aguas una luz que se refleja en ellas.
"Murmur" puede llevar implícito el significado de agua, que después además se entiende por el Atlántico.

Elena Robles Sanjuan
Local time: 21:08
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish
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Sorry for the delay. I've had some problems with my Internet connection lately. Thank you all. All your options have been very helpful.






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whose murmur laps against the sands ...


Explanation:
if the author means something like vibrate "lap against" doesn't seem a bad option to me.

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Note added at 15 mins (2006-02-07 15:28:58 GMT)
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Can someone please explain why I can't get the agree box to come up? - thanks

peter jackson
Spain
Local time: 21:08
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wave/shake/quaver/wriggle


Explanation:
these are a few options. personally i like wave (it's both a transitive and intransitive verb) because it perfectly fits the context.

a smile...

Ricardo Basaez
Chile
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pulsate / undulate / sway (here)


Explanation:
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franglish
Switzerland
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quiver


Explanation:
Vibrar:
(voz) to quiver
From Cambridge dictionaries on-line.

Si habla de un murmullo, podría usarse también:
Adj. 1. tremulous (del verbo TREMBLE)
(of the voice) quivering as from weakness or fear:"spoke timidly in a tremulous voice"

Suerte!!

Paola Giardina
Argentina
Local time: 16:08
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the murmuring waters twinkle against the sands


Explanation:
I found "twinkle " as a posibility in Larousse's Unabridged Spanish/English Dictionary.

Barbara Cochran, MFA
United States
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tremble


Explanation:
Yet another choice: "waters surge, their murmur trembling on the Atlantic southern sands"
I know it's still a visual image, but it sounds a little like "treble."


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Denise DeVries
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