actifs marins

English translation: active marine ingredients

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French term or phrase:actifs marins
English translation:active marine ingredients
Entered by: Graham macLachlan

08:03 Sep 30, 2005
French to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Cosmetics, Beauty
French term or phrase: actifs marins
This term refers to the active ingredients in micro-seaweed shower gel. It's in a title and has to be short and snappy: Exfoliating shower gel with "actifs marins".
Thanks for any help you may be able to give me.
Graham macLachlan
Local time: 11:50
(powerful/active) marine ingredients
Explanation:
treatments combine the benefits of natural active marine ingredients with a
unique treatment technique. ... care products men care marine exfoliation ...
www.phytomer.com/en/cares/care-products.html
of natural active marine ingredients with a unique treatment technique. ...
soften Pheohydrane time heart secret: short irritate care product AHA, ...
www.phytomer.com/en/cares/care-product.html
Selected response from:

suezen
Local time: 11:50
Grading comment
Thanks Suezen, I ended up saying something similar to this.
4 KudoZ points were awarded for this answer



Summary of answers provided
3 +4(powerful/active) marine ingredients
suezen
3 +4Marine Exfoliating Shower Gel (enhanced with marine extracts)
French Foodie
4 +2marine active agents
Rachel Fell
3(with a) dynamic kelp formula
John Peterson


  

Answers


4 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
marine active agents


Explanation:
rich in marine active agents, quickly eliminates make-up and impurities. ... This smoothing shower gel offers aromatic cleansing and exfoliating ...
www.dermstore.com/list_Soaps_300075ipp500.htm - 204k

marine active agents is the result of research in its own laboratory. ... When used daily, exfoliating shower gel can help fine-tune the texture of your ...
estore.heavenspa.com/Category.pasp?cid=amad&txtCategory=Phytomer

Rachel Fell
United Kingdom
Local time: 10:50
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 35
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks for your time Rachel.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  AbdulHameed Al Hadidi
8 mins
  -> Thank you, hamid3000!

agree  Tony M: Sounds ideal to me
13 mins
  -> Thanks, Dusty!
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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
(powerful/active) marine ingredients


Explanation:
treatments combine the benefits of natural active marine ingredients with a
unique treatment technique. ... care products men care marine exfoliation ...
www.phytomer.com/en/cares/care-products.html
of natural active marine ingredients with a unique treatment technique. ...
soften Pheohydrane time heart secret: short irritate care product AHA, ...
www.phytomer.com/en/cares/care-product.html

suezen
Local time: 11:50
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 32
Grading comment
Thanks Suezen, I ended up saying something similar to this.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Sylvia Smith: I vote for this one!
46 mins
  -> Thanks Sylvia!

agree  Philip Taylor: active marine ingredients
46 mins
  -> Thanks Philip

agree  Tom Bishop: active
3 hrs
  -> Thanks Tom

agree  AbdulHameed Al Hadidi
1 day 1 hr
  -> Thanks Hamid
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9 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
(with a) dynamic kelp formula


Explanation:
If you want to keep the seaweed connection

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Note added at 2005-09-30 08:15:30 (GMT)
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Kelp formula gets a few hits like this:

http://www.beautynaturally.com/prlist.html

John Peterson
Local time: 10:50
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks for your time John.


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Tom Bishop: Only if it's kelp!
3 hrs
  -> Agree
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22 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
Marine Exfoliating Shower Gel (enhanced with marine extracts)


Explanation:
I've translated something very similar to this. I do quite a bit of cosmetics translation and in my experience the English product name is generally a lot shorter than then French, with an add-on in smaller type below if necessary. So with this product you could do something like:

MARINE EXFOLIATING SHOWER GEL
enhanced with marine extracts/rich in marine active ingredients/etc.etc.

Spa on the Twenty - Treatments
Firming: Your body is enveloped in a gel rich in marine active ingredients proven to improve your skin's firmness and elasticity. A relaxing massage follows ...
www.innonthetwenty.com/ott_spa_treatment_body.htm - 13k - Cached - Similar pages

Spa Tranquila - A Unique All Natural Day Spa For Men and Women ...
OLIMER: Cleansing lotion enriched with plant and marine extracts formulated for
skin conditions ... UNISOFT: Exfoliating gel enriched with plant extracts, ...
www.spatranquila.com/products2.htm - 36k - Cached - Similar pages

Exfoliate: GM Collin skin care Products
"Compound exclusively of plant and marine extracts" ... Our Price: $29.99 US.
Intensive Exfoliating Gel 50mL, 1.7Oz, ID 1180 All Skin Type ...
www.naturalyours.com/Efoliants.htm - 27k - Cached - Similar pages

French Foodie
Local time: 11:50
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 54
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thanks for your time Mara (and tips about cosmetics translation).


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Sara Freitas
9 mins

agree  Jennifer White: agree, but wouldn't include the first "marine"
1 hr
  -> good idea, would make it even snappier

agree  Jude74 (X): I agree with this one too and like Jennifer wouldn't include the first 'marine'
1 hr

agree  df49f (X)
2 hrs

neutral  Tom Bishop: Wouldn't include the first "marine" but would not exclude "active", which I would regard as significant.
3 hrs
  -> yes, I included that in the body of answer :-)
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