12:52 May 8, 2005 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / children's literature | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Nick Lingris United Kingdom Local time: 03:12 | ||||||
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3 +12 | Another variation |
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4 +3 | See comment below... |
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3 +3 | my crack at this... |
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3 | Among them were the mire pixie,... |
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my crack at this... Explanation: Among them were Mire Pixie, the Bog Varmint, a few Green Vampires and Toads from the Mires, Diving Beetles, Black Leeches and Adders, and a host of other creatures that crawled, swam, flew or nested in the marshes. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 15 mins (2005-05-08 13:07:23 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Taking a cue from Dusty here Andrew. : ) If you drop some of these it reads much better. Among them were Mire Pixie, the Bog Varmint, some Green Vampires and Toads from the Mires, and a host of other creatures that crawled, swam, flew or nested in the marshes. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 16 mins (2005-05-08 13:08:22 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- ++++Just a suggestion, since I don\'t know who the important ones are (save for The Bog Varmint and Mire Pixie). -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 18 mins (2005-05-08 13:10:28 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Among them were Mire Pixie, the Bog Varmint, a few Green Vampires and Toads from the Mires, Diving Beetles, Black Leeches and Adders, and a host of other creatures that crawled, swam, flew or nested in the marshes. Among them were Mire Pixie, the Bog Varmint, a few Green Vampires and Toads from the Mires, Diving Beetles, Black Leeches and Adders, and a host of other creatures crawling, swimming, flying or nesting in the marshes. |
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